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by Slack Mesa
12 Jul 2010, 08:52
Forum: LRR Video Discussion
Topic: 106.7 The Drive
Replies: 50
Views: 4041

Re: 106.7 The Drive

The plot progression felt a bit forced. Specifically, the DJs were too credulous at the first appearance of the devil. It might have worked better if the visitor's stated reason for being there was connected to something that had happened previously in the script. E.g., "I'm here from the Socie...
by Slack Mesa
05 Jul 2010, 23:30
Forum: LRR Video Discussion
Topic: Canada is Sorry
Replies: 57
Views: 3677

Re: Canada is Sorry

VERY FIRST SENTENCE CLEARLY PROOFREAD SEVERAL EVERY WEEK RECKLESS, HAPHAZARD, AND FRANKLY IRRESPONSIBLE COMEDIANS DON'T EVEN UNDERSTAND YES ANY IDEA ME PERSONALLY . ...Oh. I thought if I took out all the non-reddened words this post would form a secret sentence. The S lack Mesa Research Facility he...
by Slack Mesa
05 Jul 2010, 16:27
Forum: LRR Video Discussion
Topic: Canada is Sorry
Replies: 57
Views: 3677

Re: Canada is Sorry

There's an error in the VERY FIRST SENTENCE of the brochure at 3:12: we're sorry of the imperative used in the heading of this brochure may have suggested they were not invited The word "of" in that sentence CLEARLY should have been "if." Don't you PROOFREAD your work? I invest S...
by Slack Mesa
21 Jun 2010, 08:42
Forum: LRR Video Discussion
Topic: Ways to Wake Someone Up
Replies: 53
Views: 11096

Re: Ways to Wake Someone Up

I think there was a continuity error: Paul's shirt was already wet (from a previous take?) before they put him under the faucet in the bathtub.

Funny video, though.
by Slack Mesa
14 Jun 2010, 08:53
Forum: LRR Video Discussion
Topic: Fit to Print
Replies: 70
Views: 4648

Re: Fit to Print

So funny this week, and great performances by both actors.

I liked the use of the first phone call as a plot device. The phone call bearing good news allowed the editor to shift his tone (from wild anger before the call to inquisitive anger right after) very convincingly.
by Slack Mesa
08 Jun 2010, 10:17
Forum: LRR Video Discussion
Topic: Echo
Replies: 47
Views: 2518

Re: Echo

Image

Gibb, always concerned about his health, was stoic throughout the endoscopic exam. His handlers, though, felt unimaginably awkward.
by Slack Mesa
08 Jun 2010, 06:49
Forum: LRR Video Discussion
Topic: Echo
Replies: 47
Views: 2518

Re: Echo

Emperor Gum wrote:This week's caption competition:

[insert penis jokes]

The label on the boom says, "RODE," so that's helpful, too.

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