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Good premise, and picks up at the end with escalating ridiculousness. I've noticed a trend of lots of draggy static scenes shot in peoples apartments - could it be that the relative ease of shooting reduces the motivation to tighten the script? This would have worked way better for me if vastly speeded up.
DVD titles were very funny, and liked how Paul was obviously getting rained on in the christmas carol scenes.
DVD titles were very funny, and liked how Paul was obviously getting rained on in the christmas carol scenes.
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Daniel wrote:could it be that the relative ease of shooting reduces the motivation to tighten the script?
Hey Dan! Post more, I always like your feedback.
In this case, the video was written/shot/edited in less than 24 hours, so we simply didn't have time, but I agree with the spirit of what you're saying.
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If it's THAT kind of feedback you want, then okay...
The video was visually pleasing, the plot easy to follow, and the comedy spot on. You guys really do have a great grasp on the whole "Good Budget look with little to no money".
The only critique I would have on this video is that it would have benefitted from more time in writing, shooting and editing. It would have given you some more time to get the supplies together for props, improve lighting quality, etc. Long story short, it's great, but more time would make it awesome.
The video was visually pleasing, the plot easy to follow, and the comedy spot on. You guys really do have a great grasp on the whole "Good Budget look with little to no money".
The only critique I would have on this video is that it would have benefitted from more time in writing, shooting and editing. It would have given you some more time to get the supplies together for props, improve lighting quality, etc. Long story short, it's great, but more time would make it awesome.
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