Laura, you're welcome
. I myself enjoy doing some stage-acting once in a while, but I've spent most of my time so far doing backstage stuff (stage-hand, lighting-guy, etc)
One thing sprang to mind when I read your comment, you are comming from a stage-acting background which explains the weird "feeling" I was having. It was all just a little unnatural over-the-top. On stage that's a real good thing, it's needed to get the message to the audience, on a video it can look just a little weird if you pay attention to it. (that's probably why it looked a little stiff to me) You were still doing a good job, no doubt about it, but be natural on video, no need to really exegarate anything.
One of the reasons I notice this is that I really hate dutch films because they are all acted by people with a stage-play background, meaning all acting is just a little exagarated and over the top, too much soundeffects and a somewhat static use of camerangles. Somehow, nobody in the dutch filmindustry seems to notice that acting in films is not the same as playing in a stage-play :-p